Christmas Story Comments

Oh Geez, Zvon.....those pics are stupendous!

But now, you've raised the bar, and forced me to challenge your ingenuity. A little hint......you may have to go to a few porn sites for the next set of pictures.....grin.

Zvon wrote:

Okay, I can't delete em.
I don't want this to get complicated...
Should we just leave it as it is?

If my posts in the story thread are lost in the process of placing them, thats allright with me.
Its baldars story and thread. I'm just the lowly illustrator. ;)

We could just leave as it is. It's great. The impact of having the illustration with the narrative though... can you imagine? Well, you won't have to because I'm going to combine them.

And, yes, I didn't want you to lose credit for the marvelously unlowly illustrations, but I think I can make an adjustment somewhere to make sure their creator is obvious.

OMG!!

I was chuckling at the fight scene - awesome job! - and the green jello guy and holding cell are just right...

and then BLAM! Baldarklord and Zvonder going into Big Dicks? I have tears in my eyes.

I'm loving this.

baldar77 wrote:

But now, you've raised the bar, and forced me to challenge your ingenuity. A little hint......you may have to go to a few porn sites for the next set of pictures.....grin.

Sassie's butt cheeks clinch tightly.

*wolf whistle*

baldar77 wrote:

But now, you've raised the bar, and forced me to challenge your ingenuity. A little hint......you may have to go to a few porn sites for the next set of pictures.....grin.

I think my massive pron library should suffice.
Hey, I was going to graphically undress the girls anyway for fun in my spare time.
That's my specialty, btw.
I cut my teeth in the 90's putting Gillian Andersons head on naked bodies.

Baldar,
You can go ahead with the story.
I won't be able to do my fun with graphics stuff til sometime by the end of the week.
As long as we can insert them in the story where they fit there is no need to wait.

I see you added some and I can't wait to read it

I'm working now on the bar scene where we meet the gals and I'm kinda stuck there for now.

Bam,

You can lose that thread that has the images alone in it.
No need for it.
They belong in with the story and I appreciate the great job you did making that happen. Thanks

As you wish

I think I feel the temperature rising in here.

Bam wrote:

I think I feel the temperature rising in here.

Well then take off that silly hoody!

OOOO, sounds like Baldarklord and Sassy have matching buttocks.

My favorite lines so far:

"....they might be the two the lawyer was talking about."

Lol. Yea, like there are a bunch of babes in Santa garb in Big Dicks gay bar.

"...You two are certainly looking......GREAT GRYMKR's GHOST!!"

Brilliant, just brilliant play on the ol Perry White schtick.

Zvon wrote:

Bam wrote:

I think I feel the temperature rising in here.

Well then take off that silly hoody!

But I don't think I'm wearing anything under it.

Bam wrote:

Zvon wrote:

Bam wrote:

I think I feel the temperature rising in here.

Well then take off that silly hoody!

But I don't think I'm wearing anything under it.

Isn't your head under your hood?

I PMd u the next story pic Bammi.
Could you stick it in?


.....................don't even.

LOL... would I... ?

It's inserted. And it's so AWESOME!!

Seriously, though, I love those posters and the buttocks, and that's an excellent job on the legs! Sassie's shoes are adorable.

Now where's my favorite storyteller? It's been more than 2 whole days and I'm jonsing for a new chapter.

ROFL! Great work on the bar pix, zvon. Baldarklord's really workin that ass!

Unfortunately I didn't notice until that was almost finished and I reread the scene for details that, I think, Baldar envisioned em in a booth.
Cuz we sit on each side of youz and sandwich you in.
But I was almost done and had the table and the gals seated, had just drawn up the legs....
so I was like aww, shit.
Wasn't gonna start over at that point.
I'll cite artistic license for that one.

I think those two young ladies may have the power to turn gay guys ungay.

baldar77 wrote:

I think those two young ladies may have the power to turn gay guys ungay.

I've always said all it takes is the right woman.

Baldar, you could make a living writing. You should retire and write the great American novel.

Thank you dear, I appreciate the compliment, untrue as it is, but that would mean I would have to give up my dream of becoming a porn star.

Hey... that's my dream too!

You becoming a porn star.


Excellent additions to the story! I wonder if Baldarklord is going to be willing to trade back when the time comes.

I love how you threw in the hand held book light, LOL!

Yes, well.....it's important to have good equipment when going to war.